You know, I'm reading this again and I still like it... But the ending just seems so abrupt. I agree there's kinda no where to go with it but... I don't know... I just feel like the ending could have been better...

It's really cool...I like how it's sort of like how the wolrd is relying too much on technology. Really good.

Vulcan

*sigh* Where's a Black Materia when you need one? You, girl, are _so_ good at these sci-fi doomfics. And believe me, it will happen. It will.

That is very, very scary...expand a bit and it'd make a good novel, you know that?

Omigawd...this is cool in that creepy way. Kinda like mice belling the cat. _ *adds Camilla to her fave Authors*

Excellent story. It is a little pessemistic, but very very true. Great job.