very beautifully written. s'about all i can say. not very good at reviews, as you can guess. well, ill just say its damn good.

At least this one wasn't as depressing as the rest

Again, another good one from you. I enjoy reading your work...although I'm too lazy to actually read a story, lol, I will get around to reading something a bit more substantial from you sometime soon. _

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

Very nice work! One of my favorite pieces so far.

~Heart of the Sword

I really like the last two lines, good conclusion to the poem *_*

-Nev