i really liked this! i think you do a great job w/stories!(i actually haven't read the rest, yet, but i can tell!) :) i read your poems, and they were good but, as with me, they truly don't show how great of a writer you are. *LIZ*

Oh, that was so sweet and exactly how I feel sometimes. Though I never allow anyone to know, weel, not those whoe are my problem. I thought this was very touching, and I wonder why you wrote it? I hope to read more.

Aw. if only that were true. I'm so alone but my friends would never tell me they were there for me, because they're not.

Anyway, great job! I really enjoy reading your work!

Hey, good job! These names seem awfully familiar...(hehehe, I wonder why _) I remember reading your orignal story way back when. I like this alot, but the whole first-person point is kinda weird for you. (Guess ya' got bored _)I like this piece a lot. Keep it up!