|Reviews for The Truth of Love|
| Yume Crow chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I thought that was really good, it flowed pretty well and I like how you sort of ended it in a mystery, like the reader expects more but still know it's over but wants more. The only thing was some of the rhymes didn't flow very well but I liked how it was a steady pattern and that you just changed it at the end to make it seem more complete. Obviously, your quite experienced with poetry, I have a bunch of newly posted poetry from when I was little and just randomly wrote and also from now, I am mainly writing songs so you should really look at it and give me some feedback, my pen name as you now know is Yume Crow (just so you know, Yume is dream in Japanese) I hope you have the time to check it out. THAT WAS AMAZING!
| aurias too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
Mmm... what exactly is love? Too complicated to explain.
Can't bear to part? Posessiveness?
Don't feel good when one is around others? Jealousy?
Look into every aspect of your well-being? Caring?
Are all these love? I don't know.
Nice, true poem.