Hmm, ok lets see. I am not a big incest fan, HOWEVER (and that's a big however _;;), I like your story. I am hoping you'll update this one soon cuz I want to know what happens when their parents find out. The story is going great so far, and please oh please make it a happy ending. *showers with chocolate chip cookies*.

Aw... wish I'd known this story before (

Now I'll just have to wish you a happy belated birthday _

Getting deeper into the plot... very well written.

I'm so glad Aki and Yuki are alright! There was lotsa suspense cuz i kept on thinking the officer's got something up his sleeves )

Hm... ionno the answer to the contest \ um, maybe it's that the titles contrast each other. Such as "Yuki INNOCENT" and "Aki YOKAI (monster)"

Wow... heart-breaking T_T! Tsubasa is such an arse!

It'd actually be great to see Yuki as more than just the perfect twin. There are some stories where one twin is viewed as perfect and angelic, whereas the other is a monster... but I'm glad you're breaking that habit P Go on and experiment!

_ I wuv ya and here *hands you a plate of delicious chocolate chip cookies*

Wow! What a way to begin the story! I really admire the way you you portray the first person, with his/her own words.

Great story! Aki's cool and Yuki is so sweet! _ LEMON! Write a good, long lemon!

Wow. I've been gone from the computer for SO long. Happy birthday... even though it's 2 weeks-ish late. Keep writing, it's a twisted storyline, but i love it anyway! _

THIS IS GREAT! Aki is hot. hahahha.. Yuki is cute! Happy REALLY late b-day!

omg i lov ur story. It's so cute! anyways, happy birthday!

p.s. the longer you make the story, the more we appreciate it

good luck with writing

(i hope i helped to keep u from floating away)

It's about time you updated this! Thank you for doing so! I almost gave up on this *sniff*

Happy early/belated birthday. I liked this chapter even if it was a "fluff" chapter...but please write a "content" chapter soon...*makes sad puppy eyes* Pwease!