Reviews for A Different Kind of Romeo and Juliet
L Dragoncross chapter 6 . 5/2/2003
lol

That was cute!
L Dragoncross chapter 4 . 5/1/2003
Ack! That stupid bastard!
L Dragoncross chapter 3 . 5/1/2003
Heh. They make a cute couple. _
L Dragoncross chapter 2 . 5/1/2003
i love it! If i'd found this sooner, i really WOULD give you lots of cookies. Hee hee.
L Dragoncross chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
EE. That's terrible! Not the story, i mean... The poor kid! i hate it when parents react like that. Tell them anything, my ass...
Val Mora chapter 7 . 4/27/2003
...I actually like this. I mean, the writing's not as mature, nor developed, as that in Promises and Lotus, but the plotlines are darn good. _ Je l'aime. I hope you add more, ne? It's good. Disturbing, certainly, but good, no doubt about it. _
Misodity chapter 7 . 4/3/2003
hm
Alexander C. Destin chapter 1 . 4/3/2003
I love this story all of it. It's so cute...I hope that you write more soon.
Ariel Tsuki chapter 7 . 4/1/2003
Woah, this story is good. A Romeo and Juliet situation between brothers. Umm... This is so gonna go on my faves, I wonder what's gonna happen next. You do have a few grammar mistakes but overall the story's great, keep it up!
cherryangel chapter 7 . 4/1/2003
Evil Tsubasa...Must ...hurt...

LOL! To think Yuki though he was going to get him some. And then you had Aki trick him. THAT WAS HILARIOUS!

Anyways, you deserve this. *Hands her a chips ahoy! cookie box the size of texas.* _~ happy writings!
KaiXiang chapter 7 . 3/30/2003
nicee!

ficcie so pretty~ they're always pretty n.n Aki! don't kill Tsubasa!...yet! XD make it bloody when ya do! bloodfun

And its official, ya're on my fave author list! n_n keep going!
OdangoHead chapter 7 . 3/30/2003
OMG! You MUST continue soon! This is getting so good! I want to know what Tsubasa-baka is planning!... dumb jerk. Aki should kill him. He better not do anything to Yuki! or else I'LL kill him. I'm not exactly sure how that would work. considering he lives in a story & all... but i'll find some way!
OdangoHead chapter 6 . 3/30/2003
That was a great chapter. I really like this story so far. "We're married!" HAHA! That was awesome. So adorable! Tsubasa's such a jerk. -_- Jaa, I'm gonna keep on reading!
Pai Ryu chapter 7 . 3/30/2003
I like the story alot. It was different and I like things that people wouldn't ordinarily write about. I mean two brothers falling for each other is classic. Yuki was a little too sweet for me, but I still liked him for his tactics. Aki I absolutly loved. He seemed to have different faces and personalities which adds more depth to a person. Overall it was awesome and I hope you continue and finish this story.
Bitter Berry chapter 7 . 3/30/2003
Dude...I mean dudette. Pfft, I hate that word. Anyway, I think I like Tsubasa. Why yes, I do. He's a bad ass mofo. He'll end up having his ass kicked though. Damn it all to hell! Aki better know what he's doing. .

You had some misspellings here and there. Grammar in this chapter needs to be fixed. Don't you dare give me that excuse about spell check! I'm the only one that can have stupid excuses. . Pft. Yeah. -dances for a while- Meep.

-Bitter B.
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