Whoho! Yay! D!

- Get the idea yet?

~*~Hopes Forgotten~*~

You never really cleared that thing I was confused about...I think we stopped talking about it. (haha)I'm going to always be angry at you for not updating...so there. I'm angry, I say.

Yuki is still kinky. I'm worried about Aki though. What's going to happen? AH!

-Bitter B.

Um... interesting.

awsome story! I love it! But you are an evil, evil person. Making two friends fight because the other doesn't like the one back ::shakes head:: shameful!

Please continue!

And so ya know, your on my fav list!

**hopelessly holds up two Texas size cookies, falling over afterwards** Dear, the cookies are killing me! **throws them to the author** Phew. thats a load off. KAWAII! SERIOUSLY! OH! I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE! **looks at all the Texas size cookies she has to give out to the author** If ya want all the cookies, ya know. JA-NE! -

Lol, heh , that was a funny chapter. Yep. I liked it. bye now. update soon.

oh yum, gay incest all the way. i love your whole guilty aki, innocent yuki thing when it's so obviously the other way around, yuki is such a naughty boy. update soon plz!

oh yum, gay incest all the way. i love your whole guilty aki, innocent yuki thing when it's so obviously the other way around, yuki is such a naughty boy. update soon plz!

amazing first you in.

i must say i didn't see that coming, it's very original.

-sniffle- poor Yuki, his own parents cant even spend time with him on his birthday! well some parents are like that so.

-shrug-

i like this fic, still like Lotus but this fic is pretty

The name in the chapter title refers to the person in which the second work refers to.

The word next to the name is basically a concept they try to show about the certain person and how it connects to the Aki-Yuki relationship. An example of this is how in Aki-rebel they talk about how Aki went through a rebellious stage in his life and how Yuki changes him back. Am I anywhere near the right answer?

Heh, I cheated on my final exams 8th grade. I had to! It's the only reason I didn't have to go to summer school. Yeah okay I feel really guilty now.

Anyways this chapter is really good. It's sweet.

Um I have no idea what the main difference between the chapters are but can I have a cookie anyway?

If you want, when I see you on Tuesday you can give me the pictures and I'll scan them for you. Just make sure they're not too light or too dark.

I didn't get a chance to review this or the next chapter last night so I am now. Sry.

Well, this chapter is very good. As are the rest. Hopefully they'll keep getting better

The only difference I can think of is that Yuki's are written as if it's happening now, and Aki's as if he's telling what happened in the past, like he is looking back on what happened. It's probably not right. but I tried.

-pouts- I have no cookies at the moment. How about an apple? A carrot? It's all good.

Anyway! What the hell! -stabs Tsubasa doll- Die! -smiles- . I think Yuki is so,ect. adorable! EEp! Too cute. Aki too. I love their personalities. Yuki is so kinky. Love them both. But-but-but-but no! I'm kind of confused 't the parents walk in on them? Or did I miss something? Cuz the cops just bust in. I dunno. O.o; I remember in the first chapter that the parents walked in. -shrugs- Feh.

Well, I like this very much so dearly truly yes ma'am yeah. O.o If I lost you.I'm sorry. I tend to be very the time. Hope you update you probably will cuz everybody seems to be stocked up on cookies 'cept for me. . Hm.

-Bitter B.