Reviews for Destiny
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
That was very powerful and deep. It will take more than just one reading to grasp it's full meaning.

Needless to say I liked this one a lot.

PS

Glad to see your computer problems are solved.
Liathe chapter 1 . 2/11/2003
Wow, this is a really beautiful poem :D

I love the progression that happens through it, of the speaker walking the path and being under Destiny's power, and then the embrace of uncertainty at the end. The imagery you've used is really beautiful and dream-like as well.

Also, the flow and rhyme in this poem is great - the lines rhyme but it doesn't set the poem in a rigid structure at all.

Well done, lovely work!