Reviews for Black Rose
deepdown chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
my god how sad...

'Silk upon an ivory face'

such torturing imagery, i cant say.
EloiseMidget chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Aww...So wonderful, so unhappy..Beautifully done!
UnknownWanderer chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
All the other reviewers are right. The imagery was painted perfectly here, and the inevitable ending that had to come, came. And it was powerful. P This is definitely one of my favorite's that you've written.
Callik9 chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
What a unique Valentine's day poem! I like it!
Werewolf Nighteyes chapter 1 . 2/15/2003
Very good poem! Kinda depressing for Valentine's Day you really alone? I know I am. And I hate being alone. on writing!
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 2/12/2003
"Silk upon an ivory face

Pales with the setting sun

This dies in a deserted garden

Never filled with love"

I love that. Very poignant (did I even spell that right? I can't think right now. :P) and touching.

Keep it up!

~Namir Swiftpaw
Azriel Helene Thorne chapter 1 . 2/11/2003
This is a great poem because it displays your raw emotions with great imagery. it's one ofr my favorites list! keep up the great writing