Reviews for Kiss
Alone in the Desert chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I love you, and I love this. It's a beautiful balad that should be composed by someone wonderfully tallented and sung everywhere for centuries. It has all the makings of a perfect ballad. All the love, all the pain, all the gaps that you have to fill in yourself, and mostly the beautiful sadness that's so much more profound, and it hurts you like ice when the winter light shines through it and shows how sharp it is. I have lost all coherency but I love you, and when I finish my service and we finally meet I'll give you my soldier's tags in person.
thornwitch chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
:'( no comments. too sad to comment properly. :'(
S.C. Preclarus Noctis chapter 1 . 4/29/2003 write too good..i don't likeyou anymore...hahaha just kidding! you write SO GOOD! i knowi shouldstop using the word good cuz it's getting dumb...DEAD WORDS! AHH!...ohh..this poem was soo sad! *cries*
Lady Patience chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
*angry fist shaking* I hate that you write poetry so well!

Love you, sweet.
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
I love it Fae! It's so sweet! It's very beautiful, and makes me want to cry. Can you imagine having to go through something like that? It's terrible. Anyways, great job as usual, melamin!
Lonnie chapter 1 . 2/12/2003
Thats really sweet.