Reviews for The Gatekeeper
Deikon chapter 1 . 2/11/2003
Wow, this is a very intriguing story. Opening up with that dream grabbed my attention, and the flow of the story was constant to keep that interest. Nice job. It didn't drag, it wasn't slow, it was an even pace. Wasn't very quick, either, but still turned out good. Nice description, good dialogue, nice job! Keep it up!