|Reviews for Thorn of the Kingdom|
| nadinae chapter 3 . 10/19/2005
ah! i love this story so much and i dont know if i can breathe without TOTK. so you won't ever put it up again? i really hope it gets published so i can pick up a copy and read it over obsessively. Reading TOTK is like a pick-me up for a bad day!
| lemon chamomile chapter 2 . 10/18/2005
Hi! I was so sorry I wasn't able to read your story i'm just a new member of this site. Congratulations for the story being published. I hope to read it by then. I love the excerpts you posted.
Good luck!Keep on writing!
| Tina chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
That is awesome! Good luck with everything; I enjoyed this story when I read it a while ago, and when it gets published, I'll definitely recommend it to others as a great read. )
| Just Crane chapter 3 . 9/17/2005
I liked those 2 short chapters. I was sorry to see ToK go but I will live. I hope that it gets published. I really do. Bye
| NoMoreTears chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
That's absolutely wonderful, I'm incredibly happy for you! I love this story and if it is to be published, I beg of you that you tell us so that we can go get ourselves a copy! I'm incredibly happy that I could be on the first the read this, and if it doesn't get published (which would be beyond me), that I had to priviledge to read what not many others have.
Wishing you all the very best.
| Soul's Eclipse chapter 3 . 9/15/2005
Pretty good scenes .
| gum is yum chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Yay! You're getting it published! I love the scenes, by the way.
| MolestAPeanut chapter 37 . 8/18/2005
Wow, great story. Sad, but ..good. Very good. :)
| ascnylon chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
The stories ending was surprising but well written! I loved it!
| Gemini Angel chapter 37 . 8/15/2005
i really loved your story. I loved the twist and turns that mirror reality-that the story wasn't soo-blissfully happy or easy or perdictable. i love the ending, that Abby got a life that she deserved, and not a life as a king's mistress-excellent job-
| Pandemonium Express chapter 37 . 8/12/2005
Aw...happy ending. This is an incredible story; a wild ride. I lurve it! THank you so much for writing it! (don't ask why I thanked you. I guess, just be happy that I'll stop pestering you now that this story is over with :p )
| Pandemonium Express chapter 35 . 8/12/2005
No! Kate! Come back! Aunt Kate was so cool.
Haha. Sorry, you must think I'm crazy leaving all these...hearfelt...comments on an already finished story. Can't help it though...
| Pandemonium Express chapter 33 . 8/12/2005
no! I change my mind, we like Pierre! We want him back. Tholly can't seriously expect her to become a MISTRESS, can he? Okay, so I know the answer to that, but it's so...low. Awful. Selfish. Grr...Over the years, she'll get over Tholly. Right...? -_-
| Pandemonium Express chapter 25 . 8/12/2005
This is an awesome story, but so frustrating at times! So I'm guessing Pierre was Willamaine's (sorry, I know I spelled that wrong but I'm too lazy to check-Tholly's fiance) lover. And the person who snapped the twig is Jack? But Pierre and Abby aren't going to get together, are they? That would be so frustrating! . It's good for her to get a break and step back from Tholly (sad, but good for her-especially to get out and see the world. Take a breath of fresh air), but I don't want her together with pierre! Can't she just...i dunno...make it on her own? (I know, I know; unrealistic for the time, but still! She could lie and say she's an infertile widow or something? Bother)Oh well. I need to shut up and just keep reading untill the end. Good thing this isn't an unfinished story.
So pretty much, I just had comment and I wanted to let you know that this story rocks my socks.
| devil's-fav-angel chapter 37 . 8/11/2005
wow is all i can say