|Reviews for Thorn of the Kingdom|
| FireBringer chapter 5 . 6/16/2005
| Catharsis1410 chapter 37 . 6/14/2005
Sobs... Definitely one of the best fics I've come across. Though a part of me really wanted Abigail to be with Tholly, I still love the ending. :) Great job!
| xWhit3StaRx chapter 37 . 6/11/2005
Oh, my God! That is such an incredible story! I loved it! You're awesome!
| FallenStarRising chapter 37 . 6/9/2005
Wow! What a story! You write really well!
Infact, the story line is a bit like one hindi movie 'Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam'.
If you aren't of Indian origin, you should ask an Indian friend, they will tell you about it. It is one of the few movies, in which ashwariya rai has actually done a good job.
| Dirty Secret chapter 37 . 6/8/2005
This story is so touching...*Sniffle*, an excellent piece of fiction
| conclusivelead chapter 24 . 6/7/2005
Oh, wow, what can I say? My emotions twisted to the brink of breaking when reading this story. First I was all for the Tholly/Abby pairing you had at the beginning, but then I realized that Tholly wasn't what he seemed (in several aspects). I think what first woke me up to this was when he chose duty over love. I'm such a romantic that it drove me to the edge of insanity to read what he said about needing heirs to the throne.
And then Pierre comes into the picture! poohba, you definitely did right when you molded his character, because I fell in love with him quickly and obsessively. You did amazing work with his personality. I was so happy when you chose to end the story with Abby/Pierre!
And Abigail...ah, what can I say? You did such a beautiful job with evolving her over the twenty-four chapters that I found myself thinking that she was the sort of person that I would like to be friends with.
Well, I've rambled enough, but this story kept me until midnight and I felt that you definitely deserved a review and a place on my Favorites list. Bravo, I can't wait to read the sequel.
| Rose Richonne chapter 37 . 6/4/2005
I am speechless (or wordless I should say since you can hear me talk, lol) I loved the story so much. It was perfect in every way, and the funny thing is I cried when Tiny dies but no other time. The only thing you should add is that Pierre gets her a new puppy, I would love that. I was so pulled into this story I got emotional about it as I read. You did an absolutely fantastic job with this story, it's perfect, that's all I can say. Except for one other thing, and that is thank you thank you thank you so so much for taking the time and effort and creativity to make this. Sincerely ~ Rose
| sarah chapter 37 . 5/14/2005
awesome story! i loved it...and the twist at the end was nice...not too cliche (although i do like cliched stories as well) lol great job
| gum is yum chapter 37 . 5/8/2005
AGH! This was a great story! But poor Tholly... He was soo sweet.
| dimme chapter 37 . 5/7/2005
Omg! Im so freaking tired (i had a AP test today and had to study all night) but the story was so good i had to stay up. This story was so amazing. I should have been disappointed that she didnt end up with Tholly but you just made Pierre so LOVABLE! It just seemed right that she end up with Pierre and keep her pride and virtue and stuff. After I thought about it, it really does work out the best that she and Tholly dont end up together.. whenever she and Pierre were together it made me go: ::sigh:: _ Im usually not even a fan of love triangles (broken hearts :( ) but you illustrate all the other emotions and true love between the happy couple so well! You are an amazing writer (and im a picky reader!) and I really, really hope that you publish all your stories someday and become some realy famous writer, cuz with you talent, you deserve it!
| Mi-Lu chapter 37 . 4/25/2005
This is a very good story. I enjoyed the last few chapters! I would never have thought it was end this way but I like it!
| Just Crane chapter 37 . 4/25/2005
I love the story and I can't wait to read the sequel!
| Desert Illusion chapter 37 . 4/25/2005
Very beautiful indeed. I really really feel tron thought because of Tholly, but what to do? I still believe that he is in love with her, and always will be. This is just so sad! I HATE love triangles!
Anyways, this was one awsome story! Def going up on my fav list! hehe!
Hope you write more! Take care!
Lots of love,-Maha.
| Desert Illusion chapter 29 . 4/25/2005
Interesting turn of events...
| Desert Illusion chapter 28 . 4/25/2005
*gasps in shock* He's a PRINCE!