Reviews for Unseen
Tunisa chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
i like the way you spaced it all out
Noseman chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Ok, had to check out some of your stuff. Must say that this poem really stood out. Its form is simple yet fitting. You do a good job of keeping rhythm as well, without having seemed to force the poem to the pattern. I also like the message being conveyed. Mechanically and artistically I give this an A.