|Reviews for Parting At Midnight|
| Crescendo chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Awesome! I really liked it, and the rhyming was great! Wouldn't change a thing, keep writing!
| Le Creature chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
This is pretty good. Was it inspired by that other poem of the same name by that one guy?
| Evelyn Hayden chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
_ very nice, as usual. I love it, as usual. I love your poems. _ so cool.
| musicgirl225 chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
ooh, this is awesome! i love some of the old style sort of poetry-sonnets are awesome...it has great imagery, and the word choice is natural, and flows well...overall, really good
| IHJ chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
*in awe* Oh...wow...WOW. Natural rhythm and rhyme scheme and beautiful language and imagery. I once had to write a Shakespearan sonnet for an English class. *grimace* It was entirely too modern, but this...this is great. Wonderful phrasing, the slightly archaic word choice and style works all naturally and perfectly. (Sorry I'm repeating myself. Just not thinking coherently here.)
| BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Yes, I think you are one of the better writers on this site!
I have read your stuff and to me it is almost not done, to not notice your work.
Thank you for reviewing me, even though only after reading a random review.
I wished I could give you some proper and constructive criticism, but it is not my place to do so, for I am lacking the right English expressions, and I don't have any clue what to say when it comes to how you should improve writing skills.
So I leave it with that!
I do know I like your work and I like the way you are able to express yourself, very opiniated and based on argumented facts and strong believes.
And yes, Parting at Midnight, is well written and just one of the many great pieces you wrote...
| futagoat02 chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
cool! i really, really, really, like this one!
| NeoHaku chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
That was so beautiful! ) Just so beautiful!
| UnknownWanderer chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
And here I was thinking all the love poetry on FP was crap. You've proved me wrong, this is one of the best one's I've read yet. Good work.
| Pandaemonic Paradigm chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
no, really, quite good. Good Rhythm (if i spelled that wrong, i'll kill myself).
| lady-of-the-wind chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
This a beautiful peice of poetry. You are truly amazing. _
| rosepetal1077 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
amazing! very impressive
| no carrots chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
i LOVE this poem; it's so perfect! i'm sorry for not reviewing in the first place (even though it's on my favourites list)_; you're an excellent writer
ps. thank you for the compliments &reviews _
| Mayotan chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
This is beautiful! It has the same rhyming scheme as the Bard's "Sonnet 18", and the words you used are all very expressive!
| Kyalia chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
Archaic (slightly)- in this case, good.