Reviews for Regret
account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
o, you've posted more. I'm quite happy :)

I love these lines:

Loki-mouth, he calls me,

but the allusion is weak.

This is so pretty, and the parentheses statements really add to the feeling. lovely!
E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
I don't know what it is about these kinds of poems - wonderful use of repetition and all seems like a dali-esque painting, depicting some surreal scene, but I'm sure it has some deeper connotations that I'm too exhausted to pick out. *_* Anyway, I loved this piece. _

the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
I understand it not, but it sounds very desperate and rather frenzied. I like the repeated lines about regretting eating the lime. Even though I don't get it. Hehe, whe!

Keep writing! Peace ~~
Queenofrefuse chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
as you know, i love the lines, "Singing red whites,/Stinging red palms". this poem is so different from your usual style of writing, but i think that it really fits the mood of this one well. i like the little interjections within the parentheses as well.