Reviews for Twilight Sky
Isca chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
I loved the "peep-in peep-out" part.

It's almost like an old nursery rhyme.
singinstrawberri chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
peep-peep! heheh happy indeed. how beautiful.
OutlawEris chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
That WAS good. I thought it was very cute to think of the stars as a family in the sky, because everyone tends to make them seem all "mystical" and junk like that. Quite the refreshing metaphor!
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Getuie chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Such an interesting portrayal of innocence... I particularly liked that way you described the way they glitter...
Needa S chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
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SweetGrape chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
Ah- very pretty description because the 'Peep-in, peep-out' is like stars twinkling, which is beautiful. 'darkness falls completely,/ but not absolutely' is a clever line too, gives this blanket, cosy atmosphere.

Not more than a cute description, but it's well done.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
Incredible work. I liked how you made the stars as if they were playing games. That made a beautiful image.

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thepeacekeeper chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Very beautiful. Enchanting and beautiful, like a lullaby. Ah...
Deana Bell chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
Heehee, pretty. This was a good topic for a poem, and I like a lot of the lines...The darkness falls completely,

but not absolutely."

God bless
John Ink chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
I don't know much about poetry, but I liked it. It would make a nice song.