|Reviews for Twilight Sky|
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
I loved the "peep-in peep-out" part.
It's almost like an old nursery rhyme.
| singinstrawberri chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
peep-peep! heheh happy indeed. how beautiful.
| OutlawEris chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
That WAS good. I thought it was very cute to think of the stars as a family in the sky, because everyone tends to make them seem all "mystical" and junk like that. Quite the refreshing metaphor!
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| Getuie chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Such an interesting portrayal of innocence... I particularly liked that way you described the way they glitter...
| Needa S chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Amazing job! Beautiful! I would like to see you come join my site. If you would like to check it out click on the link on my profile. By all means keep on writing...
| SweetGrape chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
Ah- very pretty description because the 'Peep-in, peep-out' is like stars twinkling, which is beautiful. 'darkness falls completely,/ but not absolutely' is a clever line too, gives this blanket, cosy atmosphere.
Not more than a cute description, but it's well done.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
Incredible work. I liked how you made the stars as if they were playing games. That made a beautiful image.
~Heart of the Sword
| thepeacekeeper chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Very beautiful. Enchanting and beautiful, like a lullaby. Ah...
| Deana Bell chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
Heehee, pretty. This was a good topic for a poem, and I like a lot of the lines...The darkness falls completely,
but not absolutely."
| John Ink chapter 1 . 2/13/2003
I don't know much about poetry, but I liked it. It would make a nice song.