Reviews for Immortality
CrimsonBlade21 chapter 15 . 5/22/2016
Who is the vizier! Why would you do this! Now I'll never know! This story was great up until that, I really wanted to know :(.
CrimsonBlade21 chapter 7 . 5/14/2016
This story is awesome so far! Definitely one of my favorites. I'm calling it out now that Daraika (sorry if I misspelled his name) is a traitor.
DomieleDoo chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
I LOVE this story!
DeletedUser182744 chapter 16 . 12/20/2011

I loves! You should get dis published! I could draw the cover for you! :P

I'd buy it!
DeletedUser182744 chapter 4 . 12/20/2011
Why is everyone dying? Great story
DeletedUser182744 chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
I've been reading the story, and it is really good. I love the historical elements in the story. I LOVE EGYPT SO MUCH! And this is definetly going in my fav's!

I am going to keep on reading now...:)
serpentlord123 chapter 15 . 10/30/2010
The irony Seth was a male god, oh well?
Amberleeee chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
This story sucks! At first it's good but then it drags on forever. And the author basically kills everyone. Not worth your time! Im giving this a low review. Reading this far was a mistake!
Night-Rayne chapter 16 . 7/16/2010
I just thought the slave thing you mentioned here was interesting, because although they do know the Egyptians had slaves, it is now believed that they were not used to build the pyramids
Night-Rayne chapter 15 . 7/16/2010
I absolutely loved this story!
Feet first chapter 2 . 2/10/2009
No, why did you have to kill the dog. What did he ever do to you? Sad, freaking Neema. She's a top class ass hole. Well, anyways I loved this chapter.
jonboblee chapter 16 . 10/10/2007
oh my god...

this is of the best story in fictionpress! ever!

i'm grinning like crazy right now! I didn't even study for my test!

haha, the points is; THIS STORY ROCKS!


why there's no ' I love U' declaration from our favourite couple?

hehe, i hope u make a sequel...


Alex Dunne chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
I read chapter one then made the mistake of looking at the reviews _ Now I know u killed him. Lol, oh well. I love it so far and can't wait to finish reading the later morning.
Lady Isra chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
I wanted to let you know that I think you are a truely gifted writer. I loved your story and read the whole thing in a few hours. It was captivating. You created such great characters! Honestly, it was one of my favorite stories and I read alot! lol. That's all I really had to say.
Kat chapter 15 . 6/26/2007
I loved reading this story. By the end, when all my guesses were being crossed out, I was trying to think so hard about who he was, and I could never remember anyone who would do it!

Very masterful plot line, though the grammar was a bit off. The characters are very real.
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