Reviews for A moon I met in Baltimore
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
That was beautifully writen. All of the emotions and the descriptions... it's so thought-provoking and makes me want to read it again.

Wonderful write.

I would love opinions on my work from a writer like you, it would really mean a lot.
miss meaningeverythingtome chapter 1 . 3/13/2003
hits home.

i'm a baltimoron.

stunning. fantabulous work. i love it- *adds to favorites*
Tethys-Orion chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
Yet again you leave me speechless, this time in reference to my own city. Thank you.

your use of repetition is flawless-"met a moon, a wide moon, by the harbor, out on the harbor", ect.

It's very good.
makkenjii chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
This makes me feel all smiley because sometimes I hear the moon talking to me. Fantastic imagery, as always. Wish I could be more helpful, hehe!
the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 2/18/2003
"in baltimore you shall run and run until you

come to the edge of the water. and then you

will remember that once men could fly, and

you have eyes like the sun."

Such a fantastic poem. Gorgeous. The imagery, it's so peaceful and elegant.

Keep writing! Peace
Heather Goldbug chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
I like all the white. it makes for beautiful imagery. (though it's a little weird with all this snow on the ground!)
Minoru Oburi chapter 1 . 2/16/2003
shi: -smiles- i live in baltimore. beautiful.
E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/15/2003
I'd like to meet this moon

someday. Someday when I

can appreciate the moon's

transluscent smile upon my

face and revel in its never-

ending, secret-revealing mood.

EG