This is one of the best stories I've ever read and hope the next is just as good, i just wish I could have read it while it was being written. Thank you so much for such a fantastic story.

Where were the guards? sloppy security for a castle. I'm so mad

NOOOOO I LIKED MARY

SHIP SHIP SHIPITY SHIP AHHHHHHHHHHH

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I love this story so much! It is quite literally one of the best stories I have ever read, and exactly what I was looking for. A noble, female Princess and her beautiful, stubborn Princess. It is so well written, the characters are layered and interesting, the setting so unique. And the main couple is adorable!

I just love it. I would buy this book in a heartbeat, just to have on my shelf.

SO AMAZING! I have never read anything like this. You are truly a very talented writer. I look forward to reading your other stories!

Fantastic story! Good work! :D

Finally found my favorite story and that's this one! One heck of a wonderful story!

You should write a sequel to this one cuz I know there's more to come for the couple.

this is so my favorite story. i love it so. thank you for writing it. you have a good skill with writhing. :D

WHAT? AHH! NOO EMMY!

"Well…don't you think he's a bit…well…feminine? I mean, he has no definition in his chest or arms!"

"And how would you know? Have you looked down his shirt? You're not that way, are you brother?"

Too funny! I'm glad you didn't spend the whole chapter describing the sex scene.

"Taking a piss, if you must know…and you-you-you're a…sweet jesus and the angels…a woman!"

LOL!

hey this was a really well written story, but there were some errors in the second to last chapter but the story was extremely well written keep up the good work :]

This was a beautiful story. Well written, although there were a few typos. But very good sentence structure, word choice, characterization, character interaction, and imagery.