|Reviews for Goodbye|
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
good job! I like the idea! :)
| CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
So sad, so sweet, so beautiful...
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
very sad and sweet! wonderful piece, i like it. great job! keep on writing!
| RavenPhoenix chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
no it does make sense! its really nice :):) keep it up:)
| VOIDKing Ki chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
I can just imagine Tidus and Yuna as I read this. FFX was wonderful and you did a grand job of putting feelings to words. Keep writing!
| ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
This is really good... So beautiful and so sad *sob*
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
aw, that's so sad!
very well written, absolutely loved it!
| Penumbra chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
my goodness, you are talented, aren't you? _ i really love this. and ff10! keep writing! :)
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
this is far from bad i think, its very beautiful, as all your poems tend to be, and has a mournful yet loving feel throughout the whole thing that i just adore, wonderful poem
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
This isn't bad at all. It's quite beautiful, if you ask me. Keep up the good work.
| Zainab chapter 1 . 3/13/2003
It didn't make that much sense, but the main idea is still given. Besides, the ones that aren't straight-forward are the best ones (in my opinion) Another well-written piece
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 3/9/2003
I put about sixty hours into FFX and then it ended up having that ending. *sigh* At least we know that FFX-2 is coming out. This was a really great piece. I wrote a poem about this also, it was called "Wings of Courage" and posted on FFNET. That was the first time a game almost made me cry. *sniff* It gets me everytime.
~Heart of the Sword
| Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
It makes sense! It's very pretty and very sad. Now I really want to play FFX, lol. Anyway, a very good poem. Keep it up.~CT
| whitesoul chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
this is so sad.
worst than my undeletable past fic.
angst to the max.
yet i have a strong i shall not cry.
goodbye your love?
wonder who that is?
hehehe let me it be * ** *
oh caress my cheek
[naik bulu roma ku] so the seducing if i m right?
anyway nicely done.
do write more about you love so i can get a better idea. hehehe
| True Illusion chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
that's good! i like that one. i've never played ffx, but i'm obsessed with all the final fantasy and i gotta admit, ffx looks real good. thankys for the review. i don't know if i'll do many more haikus but thanks anywhoz. keep up the greatness!