Reviews for Slipping
devilious chapter 5 . 2/28/2004
omg i cant believe she hates her kids. okay make her hate them more! jks. okay update soon! muahaha!
Loveliveshere chapter 5 . 3/14/2003
wow, not bad. i like the story line, and i can really feel for those poor girls. i'm a bit confused though, if shirley is 11...wouldn't that make carol 18? thus, able to move out, or take her sister away for awhile? and that transition from the naming to the present was a bit confusing. but besides, i think this is pretty good, and i'll be waiting for an update
Nonki chapter 5 . 3/13/2003
This is an interesting story, but i really pity the girls. anyway, do update soon!
raven chapter 4 . 3/2/2003
thats fucked up, child abuse is sick man, what the hell?
AriadneEthereal chapter 1 . 2/25/2003
This is well written and very descriptive. Will there be more soon?
Autumn who is too lazy to sign in for signed review chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
; I like this. I loved "Dear Jeremy" and "Sinner", too. Close to home.


Kitz chapter 1 . 2/17/2003
Wow, thats deep Cat.