|Reviews for Life|
| Phil chapter 4 . 11/21/2003
I found the language a disconcerting mixture of the formal and the 'casual'. Occasionally I found it confusing and the meaning unclear, for example:
"I was always the one who made the decisions. I never had any say when I was presented with problems. I was so looked upon when I didn’t want to be."
I am unsure about any growth taking place in the characters. Additionally, spiritual here seems more akin to psychic, and the powers don't really seem to enhance wisdom.
Thanks for writing it, but, where are we going? and do we actually want to go there?