Hey I like it! Write more plz!
~*Much Love*~

I was perusing FictionPress when I saw the title, and found it intruiging, as my story's title is A Marriage of Convenience. I couldn't believe that I hadn't read this before, and I still can't. This is an excellent story, full of characters the readers are emotionally attached to, who act realistically in very somewhat un-realistic situations. Fabulous writing. Keep up the good work!

this is a great story so far. you are an awesome writer, and though i have always had some skill at wording things, im constantly trying to improve. esp. now since i am just getting over a BAD case of writers' block! if you have any tips, e-mail me at . keep writing!

i really want owen and kate to get together! i must say tho, for a while, i didnt know where u were going with this story because it wasnt clear about who was going to be romantically involved with whom.

ah! it should b owen and iris and sam and kate! not owen and kate and iris and nobody and sam and nobody! anyway, would u plz email me when u update? my addy is
thanx and happy holidays!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-

The ex, huh... great job!

update soon

Too long, never gets to the point, too much pointless stuff, quantity not quality. Make revisions. You try to make this too realistic that it gets boring. People don't want to read stories about normal lives. Cut out all the pointless stuff.

please please please please please please update soon!

Great story! I don't have time to read the entire thing right now but I will continue to read and review. I like your writing style a lot, I love stories with good dialogue and that is what you have. The characters are interesting and you show their personalities well. I think I see where this is going but I am excited to see what happens next. Great job so far!

cool cool ~!

I love this story! I love your characters Owen, Kate, and Iris. And the apparent love triangle that's going around. It weird to want Owen and Iris together when he is about to marry Kate. I'm not quite sure what to think, but this is a great story! And I plan on reading all of it!

I really like this story, it is very well written. And Owen is sweet, even when he's throwing up and proposing! :-)

I wonder how this is all going to play out, does Iris like Owen or something? Maybe not, but I have a feeling this is all going to go downhill rather quickly. Keep writing and updating! I'm loving this!

spiffy story, nice beggining!

awesome fic!