Reviews for Storm Eyes
Kari-demon chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
ne. perhaps a good intro would help, i was slightly confused when i started to read it.
zeli chapter 1 . 2/20/2003
I'm scared. You're going to kill me if I don't review. So.

It was well written but sometimes it got wordy. You should try to keep the focus point more concise. Also, color changing eyes are very rare.