Reviews for On a balcony
A.Collins chapter 11 . 7/6/2014
I definitely feel like you could have fleshed the entire story our a bit more to give it some background and depth. I enjoyed it still, don't get me wrong. I love fluff.
R. Ficst chapter 11 . 3/6/2012
fun fun fun _

at the end, the character development seemed a bit fast, but I enjoyed the ride. fun story : )
purplehost chapter 11 . 7/11/2010
You neglected to mark your story as complete. But yes, the ending was satisfactory.
Raiya-shi chapter 11 . 6/9/2010
Thanks for the up I thoroughly enjoyed this fiction! -
i-see-faeries chapter 11 . 1/30/2009
Happy ending? Awesome. I like this, really. It's vaguely random, vaguely pointless, but not really. I love it! Wonderful job.
Teldra chapter 11 . 10/13/2008
I liked this _
firedraygon97 chapter 11 . 4/1/2008
Hee, very cute fic! Ten is a bit stalker-ish and creepy, keeping tabs on John for 2 years, haha. But it just shows his...determination to win. Great work with this!

Gran chapter 11 . 5/19/2007
I just wished to say that I first read this when it was published on and i'm really happy to find it again...

I loved it, despite it's many plotholes: I think it is a romantic, well-written piece, and the characters are very well defined...

So thank you for hours of enjoyment!

Should you ever need a beta... ;)
skunk chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
this sory is love.

good job good job.
emptyword chapter 11 . 3/18/2007
I will not say I understood most of their conversation and the subtle back-and-forth hesitations; I probably followed about half of it, and that's being generous. But one thing I think I'm able to get: those two are very well-created characters, and, given their quirks, their relationship is and probably will often be on ever-shifting grounds.

That had to make no sense. At any rate, this was magnificent.
Green Eyed Pixie chapter 11 . 1/21/2007
great story _ I thought that the whole plot was awesome, and i loved John, Ten and Clarice ] Hope you write more work like it ]
Midnights Scream chapter 11 . 1/3/2007
wow. that was cute. :)
Midnights Scream chapter 7 . 1/3/2007
and the plot thickens!:) I'm saorry I couldn't help myself. I like this story a lot and what makes it better is Ten didn't just randomly pick John and that's the only thing that bother me about the story. Very good.
zoule chapter 11 . 8/4/2006
Yay. I like this story.
Lidyah chapter 11 . 5/22/2006
I just love the writing - your english was so fun to read. :)
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