I love The BRoken style! Specially at the end.. So pretty :)

The words flow together beautifully. This was a simply gorgeous poem. I loved it.

*wipes tears it touched my heart* the tears are flowing I love it. It's beautiful. Write another you are very gifted. This is Smiley-Bear I changed my name..

Very nice, the mention from above brings back memories of old teaching of heaven being above and hell below. The words float well.

Beautifully written and thought-out.

Hi Lady L.

Wonderful descriptive poem! I'm curious about the way you've structured your lines, and wonder if you you need as many line breaks as you have? Line breaks between stanzas or verses generally signify a pause in the meter of a poem. With all of your breaks it seems to slow down the rhythm of your piece. If this was intended, then no problem. Also, I think you can distill some of your lines down to a tighter whole. Perhaps:

Angels, golden glow, halo crowned.

Soaring through the heavens cloaked

in snowy gowns of white.

Blessed by the heavenly father,

the soaring messengers spread

Wings of the softest feather down

to spread heavenly goodness to the world

The angels,

sent from above,

appear at the flicker of wings

from a dove.

Take the above only as a suggestion. I really like this poem. Feel free to flame me back if you strongly disagree with anything I've said.

Lowell

.Okay. We already KNEW that about angels. It's nothing new. I suppose your writing has a lot in common with that, ne?