Two words: YOU'RE GOOD! Wait, make that three words: You're DAMN good! I can't believe how close this update was to the previous one. Good job.

wow. that was really intense! i feel so bad for Saige! i really hope they put Edgar away!

update soon plz!

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DH

this story is doing greatI love your writing style

O.M.G.!I truthful dont think I have ever read a story as great as this one in my entire time reading at fanpress. And I have been on her alot!Its AMAZING! I felt evry emotion so thoroughly! Sadness, pain, hope, hatred, love and so many many are an incredible writer and I will be anxiously waiting for you updates!Please update soon!

Ahh! Another cliff hanger!

omg. wow. eek i feel all naucious now that all those stuff i remember. arg i HATE EDGAR! i'm reading this in french class and when you mentioned the events of the raping god i screamed DIE YOU FUCKIN BASTARD! lol omg im s d... i wuz jumping in my seat loh...but i really love this story! gawd. there is no way that edgar can win, even though in his case he succeeded in making Aidan and Saige fall in love. but geez there is NOO way he is going to win this case right? cant wait for the next chappie wappie! lav yah!

...nah, that chappie was fast! I like how you describe the intrigue that humans have in human suffering...it's so true.

uh...good chapter! very emotional but good...keep updating! that was a fast update from ur last chapter!

it seems like you were rushing towards the end, from where you start talking about her unable to go on until the end..perhaps if you were a little more specific..like when you say "when it became clear that Sage could go no futher" perhaps if you put in a definite example of what you mean, that'd be good..And also, you never talk about Edgar's reaction, and I realize she only really looked at him once during her testimony, and you can kind of guess as to what his reaction was, but it'd be kinda nice if you'd put him in a bit more..as well as more emotion from Saige. I mean, sure, she gets weapy at points, but that's just between statements, really. When she's talking she seems pretty coherent and with it for someone who's reliving her rape for the first time since it happened, and then she just sort of breaks down without warning and can't go any further..But yes, other than that, I love this story, and I'm so happy you updated, which I know sounds so cliche, but it's true, cause otherwise I wouldn't be sitting here reading it at 2:20 in the morning (GMT) right after getting an e-mail notification that you added another chapter..

i luv ur story. i'm not really a new reader but i hadn't review before. n PLS UPDATE SOON...

I love this story so much. Just the right amount of angst. And you know something, you're right people live off of others suffering, or anger depending on who you are. For me it is anger, I like to piss people off. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter, whether it is OSOTM or Attic.

man! you can't leave it at a cliffie like that!

poor Saige! i'm sure she will get her diploma, but i think it's kind of wierd that after all the attention that Saige and Aiden received after they returned from their kidnapping that they haven't been offered any finicial aid from some philanthropist.

anywho.. update soon plz!

: )

DH

i thought the story was finished already but i guess it wasnt. but now i knw it's really not yet done huh? of course, we gotta get that stupid edgar to DIE HUAHUAHUAHUA! lifetime prizon. rot in hell bastard! bwahahahah! evil laugh damn i love this story...

ugh, i HATED saige in this chapter. I think aidan was justified in chewing her out... she so totally deserved it. i hate when ppl try and commit suicide, no matter how bad their life is. and saige's life isnt even all that bad, compared to many.

aidan is cool, and im glad he yelled at her.

zeke is cool ) great job w/ writing him.

NO! Why did you have to end it there? Why? God, this is the most addicting story I’ve read in...well...a while! And I don’t even care that I’m using bad grammar! You know, this would make a great movie, I’m thinking; you’d make millions!