Reviews for The Other Side of the Mirror |
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![]() ![]() ![]() isnt she a vengeful little thing? u go girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a chapter that set up grea things to come! The thought of Saige having to take the stand to testify about her rape while pregnant makes my skin crawl. Now that the cat is out of the bag about their feelings for each other this is a point where the story can go in a new and unexpected direction. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great. I can't wiat to read her testimony. write more soon ~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() c'mon, update soon Chika! It is a good story ne? Anyway, have fun and I'll see you on the next chappie! We Could Be Gone |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay u updated! coolies UPDATE SOON! AIDAN ROX |
![]() ![]() ![]() COOL SO FINALLY SHES GUNNA BE A WITNESS THINGY MAGIG. this is kinda ironic realli tht u updated 2day cuz lastnite i just wednt 2 the cinema an watched a film on sexual harrassment but off topic kee p up the gud work! an update soon. btw how many chappies r there left till it finishes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait until the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey. i love it. i think i read some of it before, but i can't remember. but anyways, keep it up! i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH GOD! Everything was going so incredibly well... And then... KADABOOM! SUPER CLICHE! GOD! HOW MANY STORIES END WITH A TENAGE GIRL HAVING A BABY? JESUS CHRIST ON A HOTPLATE IS THERE NO OTHER SITUATION THAT COULD POSSIBLY FORCE THEM TO CONSUMMATE? CRIPES, I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS! I AM SO UPSET! Other than that, nice writing, i feel like you're trying too hard, but you're still writing nicely, so, what the hell, eh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her entire outlook on her father is endearingly naive and child-like. To be in her mind is basic average teenage girl, though by her speech and the way she sounds she strikes me as around twelve or thirteen, while I know that is not the case. I'll read on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Filler chapter? That's cool I guess. So you alternate between Attic and this I guess? That's cool too. Well can't wait for the next chapt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() _! I cannot wait for next chapter! *squee!* |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE! I need more more more! vitte vitte! (claps hands) |
![]() ![]() COME BACK! C'mon you haven't updated in a long time. ooh yeah, and you know...come back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I love this story. It seems realistic but yet it doesn't at the same time. I hope your going to add soon. |