yay! He's caught! *dances* okay, ya, anyway, sick bastard. I love this story! You must update soon! same with Limits, you need to update that. lol.

~Mel

lmao, omg, that dude is seriously warped, lol, sure there's love in the world, but u don't get it by breaking the law and raping ppl, he needs help, the poor psycho

i love this story! your an amazing writer but post a little sooner! haha i cant wait till the next part

whoo hoo! u updated! _ im glad that Saige and Aidan made up, and i hope the baby lives and isn't mentally retarded. I like how you made the characters somewhat mature throughout the story. Like how Saige isn't just concerned for herself now and realize not only her but others have problems too. And with Edgar, hes a disturbed man, very disturbed. But, if anything happens to Saige and Aidan, i hope he does something that gets them back together, hopefully not ...disturbed man with good intentions. lol, i hope you update soon! _

lynxkitty

wow this is so good i really hope the babys not retarted

yay- (doing a little victory dance) Edgar is caught, Saige and Zeke made up, Aidan and Saige makes up! the last part is what really rocks. Anyway- there's still a bad thing to all this. The possibility of their child becoming mental (like Edgar- Oh), but with proper love and care, even a disabled child will be okay. Or so I hope...

More Aidan- Saige... and what of the mother's little plan to make Saige happy? Ah.. so happy Edgar is caught. Whoohoo. Just remember to update- ._. It was a little too long of a wait last time. I was so sad.

oh im so glad you updated! and yay edgar was caught! i seriosuly cant wait for part 3...update soon!

Omg im crying right now, its a good story but you havent wrote anything in a whiile!

_ shocked by Aidan's reaction. _ your words capture a lot of emotion, its if i could feel everyones pain and fustration. wow...i half want to torture the Edgar dude, but don't want to because hes the one that brought them together. hes a disturbed man...VERY disturbed. I hope you update soon, I love this story! its original, and its mysterious in ways. haha...the double negative, i had to read it twice before i got it, but that's because i was so anxious to find out. _ i hope things get better for saige and aidan! poor zeke...plz update soon! i can't wait!

lynxkitty

That was very impressive. Your grasp of the human psyche is astounding. I must admit that I was a bit shocked at Aiden's reaction in the last chapter there, but I suppose it's easy enough to explain, what with him almost losing his child and Saige in one fell swoop. It's no wonder he was upset.

I look forward to reading more of this. It's one of the best pieces of writing I've ever seen on the internet. And I've been around a long time.

"Suicide is a permanant solution to a temporary problem." ~C. Johnson, Reno 911

Good chapter... I'm glad you updated... the 'burning white' was redundant.. I mean, the screen is white enough.. lol

But yes. Update again! And your other stories, too!

Hey! Awesome, awesome, awesome story. It's got a great and original plot, if a bit fast-paced towards the beginning. Update soon!

~lyv

wow, expertly written. so much emotion and detail. keep it up and update soon.

Whoa...that was different...great chapter. Poor Zeke...well, keep up the good work...this story is great!

*picks Zeke up and cradles him* AWW! MY ZEKEY PO! WHAT HAVE U DONE TO HIM! *huggz him tight*

SHES ALIVE! OMG YAY! I never thought of the baby dear Lord im getting stupid -.-

DUDE! I **love** this story! IM SOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! I WANT MORE THOUGH!

Your very faithful *laughs hysterically* reveiwer-P.B