I read this story in one breath. Needless to say, it took me some time, but I enjoyed it very much.

One thing: I can imagine what difficulties they would have going to school as a pregant teen. Maybe you could have described a bit more about that situation. As well the Mike and Jessica thing seems kind of sudden and underdeveloped.

Other than that, the characters are realistic and plausible, and it was impossible not to symphasize with Saige and Aidan for what they went through.

All in all, this was an incredible story.

Thanks of writing! )

p.s. Isn't being Canadian great? D

This was a marvelous story, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I look forward to possibly reading some more of your work. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, and keep up the good work!

aww... that's so sweet.. i was like crying!That was amazing... beautiful even.I congratulate you on a job well done! I'm sure, if you try, you could probably get this published. I know, I would buy it!

that was creepy... the, "tell me dear, do you have a lover?" ... ugh. -shudders-So this guy is just a psycho maniac who wants to make 2 people fall in love?That's just messed. Well.. time for me to read part 3 now.~Maho Shojo

hehe, i've finished reading part one! woot! now onwards! to part two!

grr. He might be insane, but I still don't like the justice system. I'm glad Hope's okay though. Great story. I think I might just read more of yours now. I like two out of two so...

Yay! They got him! Well... I guess you knew that, didn't you. Oh, well. Saige had to get pregnant. That was obvious, but I don't care. I hope it's alright. I guess I just have to keep reading to find out what else happens, huh?

ok, I think I'll review at the end of each part. Ok. Edgar... Who does that? I mean seriously. That's just wrong. Argh! Ok, ok, I give. I love it. Anything I decide to read I generally like. I've only had one book I didn't. I'd tell you to keep it up, but I think this story's finnished. Hm.

incredible

Wow what an incredble story so far..I will have to read the rest last..but it's like a classic love story or something to that effect. Anyways love it so far..but I hate Edger..stupid bastard...I'm also hoping that it's not Edger's baby either.

It's 2am now. So if there're typos or if I'm incoherent, don't blame me! (same goes for the previous few reviews. haha.) I enjoyed reading the story. I hope that doesn't make me a sadist! haha. You've done a great job with this. Giving Saige and Aiden a lot of obstacles to overcome yet not dragging out any unnecessary scenes. (like the two of them not admitting to each other that they're not in love, etc.) I like this story, muchly! ) heh. Have a great week!

Whew. At least it's Aiden's baby. Back to my previous review though. \ I think the two of them have a Real Tough time ahead of them. and. AH! The baby is going to be retarded? More complications.

die. I hope it's Aiden's baby. I really do. This seems so irrelevant, but even though I'm a hopeless romantic, I wonder what Aiden and Saige would do with their lives. I mean, if they get together. It seems to me that neither of them would have much of an education. \ Tough life ahead of them, I think. bah.

Whoot. I Really Really Like how you've woven this story. Maybe a tad more background on Edgar (stops self from puking) and where he came up with this mad-ass plan of his. Especially with his mummy gone. heh. hmm, also, I hope he used protection when he raped Saige (fat hope). URGH, she might just be pregnant now. ew. The poor girl \ Most of the story is really believable, which just makes me enjoy it more! Except the bit where Saige was left alone in the room for 2/3? days... No water? Otherwise, coolness! Can't wait to read more. and I think you're being cruel! It won't be that easy for them to get out, will it? BAH. Oh well, Edgar is SO TWISTED!

This is an amazing story. Slightly depressing, but well worth the read. I admire your talent! Keep up the great work.