Reviews for Pass The Kaleidoscope
Loreil Darksky chapter 10 . 7/2/2010
OHMIGAWD this is awesome! I love this world that you have this set in, with the Drifters, and all! I hope that you'll get a few competition scenes in there soon! CAN'T WAIT FOR UPDATES!
person chapter 10 . 5/6/2006
It's a wonderful story!But are you ever going to finish it?
Kezkay chapter 6 . 10/24/2003
SUCKY CHAPTER? How dare you say that about this golden apple of immortality! *schmacks you upside the head* I loved it! Bayrie's growth as a character was simple amazing! Why haven't you written more? Last updated in APRIL? Get off yo' lazy ass! ahem. -kez
Kezkay chapter 5 . 9/13/2003
"For all we know you could work for the priest and are just trying to get us to go to school and wear uniforms and prance around going ‘look at me I’m educated, woohoo!’" I had the most hilarious image of this... and burst out laughing to the astonishment of my bored dog. Anyway, I just love your writing style, heh.

I checked up on this fic and saw that it hasn't been updated for a long time. I had better update soon, or "If you try pulling anything funny I’ll beat your punk asses up, you got that?" Good. -Kez
Kezkay chapter 4 . 8/13/2003
o, odd and mysterious chapter! Well done, hehe! I ended up feeling disturbed, but hey... All the better, WHE~! -Kez
Phayd2Dark chapter 10 . 8/5/2003
how did i ever pass up reading this story? THIS IS GREAT! i love the characters! Esp Tairo...*swoons* hes so funny! I feel a bit sorry for him and all though. hm. Oh well! Great story! The characters are so loveable and the plot is really creative and great!

Gomen i can't leave you one of my famous long reviews, but i've just finished reading this online and its 4;23 in the mornings (SEE WHAT YOUR STORY DID? it made me a insominiac! hehe) so, i'll just leave it at, i'll be back and expecting more!


AAHB ShadowFox
Rhetorics chapter 8 . 6/26/2003
hmm... very mysterious. Seems like he's just going to follow Tairo, but he ends up bumping into other people. I love Tairo's character, it's stayed the same since the very first chapter. lol, good job with the character development, and good job with the chapter overall lol.
Rhetorics chapter 7 . 6/26/2003
Ahh, sorry I haven't been reading for a while. Well, school's over onw, no more of those friggin finals. Well, once again, good chapter. Looks like everyone's causing trouble now. Lol, I love the dialogue u put into the story, it's so... flloowy lol. Ok I'll shut up now,
Me chapter 10 . 6/8/2003
Well, if I get to be Tai's nurse I get to wear nurse clothes!

In a non-perverted way.

Maybe I should just skip that entirely.

But what is going on with Tai and that girl? I haven't even met her yet!

Tai is in big trouble. I may not be able to manipulate chi, but I'll knock some sense into him with something else!

Or else he can buy me Clay Aiken's cd and then he can be forgiven.

But he still has some explaining to do. At least it's not my friend this time tho...
Kezkay chapter 3 . 6/3/2003
"Get OFF of me you…OUCH, jesus you’re like a rabid child molester…OW, damnit!" *ROFL* Haha! Great chapter, though a little short for my tastes:) That whole pizza guy thing was confusing! I'll never look at those guys the same way again! *suspicious glare* -Kez
Rhetorics chapter 6 . 5/26/2003
Heey, I liked this chapter. Kelby seems like a very interesting character. She's probably going to be the main girl that all of the guys fall for :p. It'll be Love HIna flipped over, no jk. And once again, thumbs up on the character development and even though the girl wasn't in this chapter, she still scares me (I just realized that in almost all of my reviews, I say she's really scary). And omg, the part where he was 'jacking off', that was hillarious. Dont' get me wrong though, I"m not the type that likes perverted humor, I just thought that was funny _. And oh yea, I'm thinking about using how you have the first person for each chapter for each of the characters (I don't know what it's called lol) in one of my upcomming stories. Ur fic was inspiring lol. Well, if you have a problem with it, make sure u tell me, but yea, if you don't mind, I'd really like to use that format. I find that it works really well. Well, good chapter again, keep writing.
Rhetorics chapter 5 . 5/26/2003
Ahh, I havent'read in a long time _ I'm finally back from stress week. It's like I was frozen in time and life sped up without me. Ok enough about me, on to the story.

I like Roshoko. Roshoko and Dyonie are my favorite characters. Ahh, I love the way u do ur character developement, such a wide range of... characters lol.

And that little girl CREEPS me out... Just the whole albino-bunch gives me a creepy vibe. Hmm... it seems things will get a lot more interesting. FInally, the introduction's passed and the plot starts going. _ it'll be interesting ot see what happens next.
Kezkay chapter 2 . 5/22/2003
hmm... interesting. What a weird girl. I'm guessing she'll reappear sooner or later, but FREAKY man. I think that I read that part too late into the night while home alone, after watching Sci-fi movies for hours upon hours. You're going to change it to third person? Won't that be just a little...awkward? I like it in first person, even with the added bias. It adds a little flavor that otherwise wouldn't be there. Oh well, be back later! -Kez
Kezkay chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
I LOVE THIS STORY. I love the perspective, how you describe things and how you immersed me in the lives of your characters.. Oh yeah, I love your characters too! I have nothing whatsoever to criticize about your fic, and I'll be back as soon as I can get on another computer! -Kez
Charmedwanabe chapter 10 . 5/1/2003
HOW DARE THAT JERK HURT MY TAIRO! IM GOING TO KILL HIM THAT I AM! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! and im also going to kill that ugly blond slut birdy. teehe

*starts making plans to kill murasaki and birdie and a plan to make tairo fall in love with me.* you know you can always make a fanfic of me glomping my cute widdle tairo lol ~_ well great fic
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