Reviews for A Flute in the Band
auburn-bandchik chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
WOW! that was AWESOME! I love it. you must write more poems!
Garnet Aurelia chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
We, what a pretty poem! _ Very nice flow as well.
Katiefoolery chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
This is just right. I too once played flute in a school band and I believe you've captured everything beautifully. I especially liked the bits that talked of joining together, being part of something big. 'The Beat in my heart, in my soul...' Oh, yes.
Morbane chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
*smiles* Nicely true, and I like the way you can convey a grand atmosphere but keep the language fairly simple and clear.
Winged One1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
Goodness...I generally only read fantasy poems, but that was marvelous! Your imagery is stunning. The first stanza was so beautiful, and I love "My lonely Song echoses around me...But does anyone hear it" Again, wonderful poem. winged one

P.s. thanx for the reviews-winter sky started out as a lament of light pollution and then...er, morphed. :)
London Clockwork chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
*claps* That was amazing! I love the tone of it.