Reviews for unborn
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Good description of the unborn in the womb and that you used the satelite as a metaphor or alegory.
I-Am-Me-Only-Me chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
really nice one! it is nice to be obsessed with something! it's inhuman not to be! this is a great peom!
Blooming Phoenix chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Very much a dream poem! I feel like I was sitting in a subway running across the universe when reading this.. very unusual.. I don't think I've ever read anything like this. Very unique, short and beautiful. Keep up the good work!