Reviews for In That Moment
Whatever-I-Say chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Nice poem…I like it. I've never read a poem like this one, it's different form the poems I usually read but I like it. Good job and keep writing!
Chibis223 chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
The way you write it makes it sound not so bad. I love your poetry, I must read more!
Jenis chapter 1 . 6/11/2003

pennydeath chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
Death? Suicide? Something that's dark...but the path to it is light...I like that idea. Brilliant job.

AlahanTao chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
That is pretty good. Some constructive critisism here(not many poeple do that)

Most of the poem is simple words, but the first stanza has longer words. It would be better if it was consistent.
saiya-jinmira chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
Wow there are so amny feelings that we have both had...I feel like I can make some underlying connection...
Jubei-chan1 chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
This was the beginning of a journey. I love the description of the elements. It is those things that are experienced by all that allow such a wide range of readers to connect with images. As Tolkien would put it, "The road goes ever on and on down from the door where it began." I read your profile, and very very much am obsessed with LotR as well! I think thats why I was drawn to this poem. Very well written! Many thanks for posting it!