|Reviews for Princess of Thieves|
| Krytzie chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Good language and explanations, but one thing you should try is to keep a timeline. Try to keep all the events in order. You double describe some things too, like the sister being the perfect princess and such.
Just some ideas. Keep it up.
| Dark Puck chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
It's only slightly OBVIOUS what transpired. But - my lips are sealed. THe muses are seeing to it, damn them.
Very well done, and I can't wait for chapter 2~