Reviews for Princess of Thieves
Krytzie chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Good language and explanations, but one thing you should try is to keep a timeline. Try to keep all the events in order. You double describe some things too, like the sister being the perfect princess and such.

Just some ideas. Keep it up.
Dark Puck chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
It's only slightly OBVIOUS what transpired. But - my lips are sealed. THe muses are seeing to it, damn them.

Very well done, and I can't wait for chapter 2~
392 | « Prev Page 1 .. 17 24 25 26 27