Reviews for if I could stop you loving saints
toysoldier chapter 1 . 2/25/2003
lord, rose, you just churn these out like. daily. I'd have to come to this site every day to keep on top of all the poetry you write. and they're all great, which would infuriate me if I could get past the fact that I like them all so darn much.

the stellar parts of this poem: "so that you and I could breathe without the murmers of holy orders getting in the way-"

and the last stanza and last line are just fantastic. I mean, allergic to marble. A land of foppish courts and natural salt licks. Where do you find lines like that? Who cares, really, as long as you keep writing them.
E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Oh my lord, that last line

was positively haunting. I

swear these poems are going

to give me a heart attack

someday and I'll die from

overexposure to the beauty

inherent in your words. You

are a saint yourself, you know

makkenjii chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Wow, what an interesting ending! I like these characters a lot.
p. goddess chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
The last two parts. I adore. Beyond any belief. And I can only write in short sentences to somehow convey that. (Okay, so the last one wasn't that short.)
ShinigamiForever chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
*sigh* I love the part about you being young and wide-eyed and vernacular. This is such a fantastic poem, the type of imagery and the pristine love of marble and saints. *grins* Your usual good work.