I have to say that I particularly like the style this was written in. you're really pushed forward to read each line.. another thing I noticed was as the poem progressed, the use of "I" increased, setting the reader up for the ending so that it struck a more powerful chord rather than just some skeletal persona.

I have to say that I particularly like the style this was written in. you're really pushed forward to read each line.. another thing I noticed was as the poem progressed, the use of "I" increased, setting the reader up for the ending so that it struck a more powerful chord rather than just some skeletal persona.

i dont really know much about anorexia so i cant relate to it as i relate to your other poems, but this really got the point across, yknow? it was good!

This is absolutely amazing - you are an amazing writer.

There is such depth of feeling in your poetry. It's fantastic!

Diana x

Wow. I have never suffered from anorexia myself and (I hope I didn't misread your profile) it seems you did. The way you've communicated through this poem was exceptional. I haven't seen this particular "style" before and enjoyed it greatly. Please, continue your writing.

Wait... my poems got deleted? Well now I'm a little more than just slightly pissed also. I had no idea my poems weren't there, I'm sorry about that Tori! I'll try to get them re-uploaded as soon as I can. I just hope I still have them all saved on my computer. Again, sorry 'bout that!

Lady Kayley;

Lovely poem- nice to see you have a new twist on things. talk to me when you reupload your poetry- it's gotten me slightly pissed. I would have printed them out had I known you were going to delete them.

The none to friendly;

Tori Amos II./

hey i like this alot its really good.

this is very well written

you discribe it so well

Erm.. Wow? *blinks staring* Thats really.. I mean REALLY morbid. hehe..

Tristen