|Reviews for pedagogic virtues|
| GoodbyeDeleteThisPage chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
Your poems make me feel. They make me feel something...something...
"Once in a while you give birth to a new and breathing sentence.
We say, it's literary genius,
but you look at us and, shuddering, say, I'm alive"
These lines are strikingly tragic and true. They make you feel the downfall of the writer that has just came up with something wonderful, proving their alive. Amazing.
| Rose of Dresden chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
o! I *love* this, the "I'm alive" part and the winter stanza at the end, oh! I'm writhing with adoration. This is beautiful!
| p. goddess chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
*shakes head and adores you*