Reviews for Lotus
HouseOfJack chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
The fuck? Where are the quotation marks? Noooo!
eeyoresdarling chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Y'know, I want to love this. I really truely do. However, YOU DON'T HAVE ANY FECKING SPEECH MARKS.

Please consider fixing this before my brain melts from trying to decifer what is speech and what is not.

Thanks 3
completeandtotalrandomness chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
This is amazing and it's only the first chapter, but it's hard to idenify when the characters are talking cuz there's no " " marks. Other then that you introduced this story very well.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 21 . 7/13/2009
This story is adorable ]
K the mysterious chapter 21 . 12/6/2008

But there are no more to read...



I really, really did love them..._
moneymakestheworldgoround chapter 21 . 2/20/2008

omg. no more. and it hasnt been updated. in 8 years. *GASP


damn. i rly enjoyed this story. it was awesome, very entertaining, and i rly wanted to see how this would end.
Alexis chapter 21 . 9/1/2006
What... Are you just going to drop this story? And never continue it again? That's HORRIBLE!
red-snow chapter 21 . 8/20/2006
Update REALLY SON! Or else... Rotton tomatoes, and Tp are comming.. DUN DUN DUN!
Gravilove19 chapter 21 . 8/19/2006
I can't wait for your next update.
toads chapter 21 . 8/10/2006
write more soon :)
a beautiful somewhere chapter 21 . 5/2/2006
GAH! Please don't tell me this is it! I really really hope you update, because this story is hilarious, not to mention just plain lovely. _
Jado the Shadow chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Slave fics are to die for. Handsome masters trying to seduce them and hopefully succeding make my day. Japanese names that mean flowers in a fantasy theme break tears of joy to my eyes. So I am currently happy, dead, and crying do to this story.
Alexis chapter 21 . 3/31/2006
Will you ever continue this? It would seem rather depressing to just leave it here... Even just for a pause...
I.F chapter 21 . 1/28/2006
It's a new year! So why don't you make a new chapter!
Reignbowed chapter 21 . 12/21/2005
I think this fic is totally awesome, and I would love for you to continue.
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