|Reviews for Lotus|
| MisterCrown chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
The fuck? Where are the quotation marks? Noooo!
| eeyoresdarling chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Y'know, I want to love this. I really truely do. However, YOU DON'T HAVE ANY FECKING SPEECH MARKS.
Please consider fixing this before my brain melts from trying to decifer what is speech and what is not.
| completeandtotalrandomness chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
This is amazing and it's only the first chapter, but it's hard to idenify when the characters are talking cuz there's no " " marks. Other then that you introduced this story very well.
| MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 21 . 7/13/2009
This story is adorable ]
| K the mysterious chapter 21 . 12/6/2008
But there are no more to read...
I really, really did love them..._
| moneymakestheworldgoround chapter 21 . 2/20/2008
omg. no more. and it hasnt been updated. in 8 years. *GASP
damn. i rly enjoyed this story. it was awesome, very entertaining, and i rly wanted to see how this would end.
| Alexis chapter 21 . 9/1/2006
What... Are you just going to drop this story? And never continue it again? That's HORRIBLE!
| red-snow chapter 21 . 8/20/2006
Update REALLY SON! Or else... Rotton tomatoes, and Tp are comming.. DUN DUN DUN!
| Gravilove19 chapter 21 . 8/19/2006
I can't wait for your next update.
| toads chapter 21 . 8/10/2006
write more soon :)
| a beautiful somewhere chapter 21 . 5/2/2006
GAH! Please don't tell me this is it! I really really hope you update, because this story is hilarious, not to mention just plain lovely. _
| Jado the Shadow chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Slave fics are to die for. Handsome masters trying to seduce them and hopefully succeding make my day. Japanese names that mean flowers in a fantasy theme break tears of joy to my eyes. So I am currently happy, dead, and crying do to this story.
| Alexis chapter 21 . 3/31/2006
Will you ever continue this? It would seem rather depressing to just leave it here... Even just for a pause...
| I.F chapter 21 . 1/28/2006
It's a new year! So why don't you make a new chapter!
| Reignbowed chapter 21 . 12/21/2005
I think this fic is totally awesome, and I would love for you to continue.