Reviews for Lotus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The fuck? Where are the quotation marks? Noooo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y'know, I want to love this. I really truely do. However, YOU DON'T HAVE ANY FECKING SPEECH MARKS. Please consider fixing this before my brain melts from trying to decifer what is speech and what is not. Thanks 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing and it's only the first chapter, but it's hard to idenify when the characters are talking cuz there's no " " marks. Other then that you introduced this story very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is adorable ] |
![]() ![]() I..LOVE...YOUR...STORIES... _ But there are no more to read... NO! *sobs* I really, really did love them..._ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... omg. no more. and it hasnt been updated. in 8 years. *GASP crap. damn. i rly enjoyed this story. it was awesome, very entertaining, and i rly wanted to see how this would end. |
![]() ![]() What... Are you just going to drop this story? And never continue it again? That's HORRIBLE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update REALLY SON! Or else... Rotton tomatoes, and Tp are comming.. DUN DUN DUN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for your next update. |
![]() ![]() write more soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! Please don't tell me this is it! I really really hope you update, because this story is hilarious, not to mention just plain lovely. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slave fics are to die for. Handsome masters trying to seduce them and hopefully succeding make my day. Japanese names that mean flowers in a fantasy theme break tears of joy to my eyes. So I am currently happy, dead, and crying do to this story. |
![]() ![]() Will you ever continue this? It would seem rather depressing to just leave it here... Even just for a pause... |
![]() ![]() It's a new year! So why don't you make a new chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this fic is totally awesome, and I would love for you to continue. |