|Reviews for Flicker|
| the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
Very nice imagery! I liked the repetition in the first and third stanzas, provided a good transition.
Keep writing! Peace ~~
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
nice use of opposites, especially when dealing with different degrees of heat/cold - made for some really interesting effects.
| Queenofrefuse chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
the first stanza reminded me of that little mermaid song. anyway, the "fire" made me think of your new boy because of his hair, which i know you absolutely adore.
| account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
love the sleeping in shadows line.
| Seeking Sight chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
I like it! But what does it mean? Nice writing style.
| Clarachu chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
I read this twice, and I think I'l read it a couple more times later because every time I read it, I get it just a little more. What a vry interesting and well-written poem! É
| Kaoru chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
*for me* it was hard to read *or more likely to understand* but i think it is a good one. Nice work.