There's gonna be more, right? Please tell me there's going to be more!

~Luna

lol you could've finished the last word, at least.

~Luna

Really good. Shows that taking a leap of faith can be very risky and yet rewarding.

~Luna

what have you done? you didn't kill him, did you? why are they jumping off whatever they're jumping off? what's going on? ::runs away and cries:: now i'm all scared...poor sean!

it was really good

Poor Sean! My friend's name is SEAN! AND YOU KILLED HIM! YOU KILLED HIM! haha! I REALLY love this poem, or.. whatever it is, its kinda like a small story in its own! Its awusme, my favorite work that you have done.

NO! cliff hanger!

O_O

I feel like I'm jumping down myself

very good work

I'd say this one is the best so far, but the whole thing is really good.

OHH! Cliffhanger! No! Great poems again, but... cliffhanger! Wa. Great cliffhanger, but... wa.

I Hate Being Negative, But I Don't Like This One As Much As Part 2.

Still Good Anyway.

Sal Should Become The Best Poem Writer In The World Though.

Even at listening to music at full blast, the second part of this poem makes the room u are in silent as you read it.

Amazing!

This is a really good poem.

I Liked How The Poem Rhymed So Well.

Well Done Sally!

David

Amazing!

What a rush! I feel andreline rushing to my brain.

This is the best! Wonderful!

I love the image, I feel like I'm jumping down myself.

Ho lovely is this!

So brave, and strong and totally amazing!

The determination is admirable. Great job!

This is one of my favourites, and i think its one of your best :D