cant wait to see what happens next...hope you update...i love this story

update soon thou

dear chelsea,

please continue your story.

i love it.

and you.

marry me?

love,

andrea.

really great

the story is very well written cant' wait for more

come one kid. two years. update this shit.i love you lots haha.

very good. Please up-date soon like the story alot. Please make her see that Jake is the one for her not Leon in the next chapter.

Sky

Interesting story! :) Update soon, no? Lookin' forward to it.

~ Bai.

kid, why haven't you updated in like, a year? come .

I don't know if I should forgive you or not. You took so long to update, that I actually stopping checking whether or not you have. You are an evil, EVIL woman, savvy?
But good chapter. Keep 'em coming, alright?
Good.

Hey Chels! I'm loving this how you're finally updating, yet I'm going away for the summer so I won't be able to read it! :(
blaah
So really good so far...you should really make your chapters longer so there's more to read.
Well, I'll be calling you tomorrow night when I get to my other house so ttyl!
~Luv Always!~
Risa!

I love how to get the dialog so realistic. like real people, not your sterotypical characters

Wow. I kno it's been since forever, but that jessica girl, wow. she's a fucking moron. Chels, write the way you want there is nothing wrong with it. And you gotta start updating, don't wait till this summer. I can't believe that jessica girl is such a fucking cunt that she thinks she can do that. And plus she basically blurted out that she's a slut. wow. She has gotta get a fucking life.
Luv u chels.

I love this story! Please hurry up and update!

this is a great stroy but wheres the next chapter u cant leave me hangin like this

dude. whoever this jessicamackenzie bitch is (or whatever the fuck her name is) should shut the fuck up. no one wants to read your god damn story. and why do you talk like a fucking 12 year old aoler? it's sad. and who the fuck are you to bitch about how chels is writing her story? it's her story. she doesn't give a damn about what you think about it. she does on the other hand, care about what i have to say. and that is that you suck. sorry for the "cussing" but i feel that it was necessary to get my point across. who the fuck actually posts comments on every chapter that actually have to do w/ the story? at least i post about random things like the beanie kids. and at least thats interesting. fuck. you just have no life. and thats retarded. you cunt muffin. go do something useful w/ your time. something like not being a lesbian. thank you for your time. this has been an enlightening little talk. bye.