You have a real gift for writing this story.I have to gine props. Im gonna keep reviewing as long as you keep writing this story.

Continue writing. I like this. Hope you get some more chapters out soon.

I was the first to review your story? Doesn't that make me feel special! Thanks for continuing it, it's really good. My computer's been acting strangely lately, so I might not be able to review every chapter, but that does not mean that you've lost a reviewer! I can't wait until you update again!

dude! this story is addictive ... i guess its just the whole bad-boy falling for the good-girl ...ANYWAYS ... can't wait for the next chapter ...

::grins:: o... i love this! _ ::puts in fav stories list n claps happily:: ur really talented _ i hope ya update soon!

great job! keep the good work goin!

Now there comes a time, in every man's life Where decisions have to be made: Whether to toil, to Labor or just plain piss your days away, Away, Away! Got a funny feeling that my times are Caught in a jar... Madness and Insanity Have arrived... Know to Christ and everyone Else my times are caught in a jar Satan's Grin is bearing down on me Up in the morn, here comes the day, God knows I hate it this way when I'm in a casket Life, fighting the wife, neglecting the kids, spending Time on rediculous bids, the four walls Are closing in. Got a funny feeling that my times are Caught in a jar... Madness and Insanity Have arrived... Know to Christ and everyone Else my times are caught in a jar Satan's Grin is bearing down on me got a funny feeling that my times Are caught in a jar, madness and insanity Have arrived Know to Christ and everyone Else my times are caught in a jar Satan's Grin is bearing down on me got a funny feeling that my times Are caught in a jar, madness and insanity Have arrived Know to Christ and everyone Else my times are caught in a jar Satan's Grin is bearing down on me got a funny feeling that my times Are caught in a jar, madness and insanity Have arrived Know to Christ and everyone Else my times are caught in a jar Satan's Grin is bearing down on me still got a funny feeling that my times Are caught in a jar, madness and insanity

there we go. thats all the lyrics to the second one.

here's the first one

Face down in the gutter wonit admit defeat though his clothes are soiled and black, he's a big, strong man with a childs mind, Don't you take his booze away! He's been at it for years drinking balls and beer heis a hero to most he meets (hey hey hey!) but inside he cries black swollen eyes this man he sheds no tears Now his wife & kids sing a different tune as they worry about their daddy dying (hey hey hey!) but this arrogant fool breaks every rule it'll be nothing but pride that kills him. Could he listen no he won't that's all she wrote he'll be dead before the daylight shines but the thoughts and prayers of a million strong might keep this fool from dying. He's a legend in the bar with every scar fights a thousand bigger men, (hey hey hey!) but now he fights and looses got all the bruises will someone please step in? Cause this Irish fools got a great big heart he keeps climbing back in to the ring (hey hey hey!) In the low down circles where he holds his court this man he once was king. Could he listen no he won't that's all she wrote he'll be dead before the daylight shines but the thoughts and prayers of a million strong might keep this fool from dying. Could he listen no he won't that's all she wrote he'll be dead before the daylight shines but the thoughts and prayers of a million strong might keep this fool from dying. He's a legend in the bar with every scar fights a thousand bigger men, (hey hey hey!) but now he fights and looses got all the bruises will someone please step in? Cause this Irish fools got a great big heart he keeps climbing back in to the ring (hey hey hey!) In the low down circles where he holds his court this man he once was king. Could he listen no he won't that's all she wrote he'll be dead before the daylight shines but the thoughts and prayers of a million strong might keep this fool from dying. Could he listen no he won't that's all she wrote he'll be dead before the daylight shines but the thoughts and prayers of a million strong might keep this fool from dying.

yeah. thats all of them.

ta. (for the millionth time.)

or you can use this one

there comes a time in every man's life when decisions have to be made weather to toil to labor or just plain piss your days away away away got a funny feeling that the times are going to change madness and insanity have arrived

they're both from the dropkick murphys cd do or die and the firdt one is bar room hero and the seconf one is caught in a jar from the same cd.

face down in a gutter won't admit defeat though his clothes are soiled and black he's a big strong man w/ a child's mind don't you take his booze away.

rock!

da na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na

ok. thats it. and the da na's are correct and everything. ta again.

hey kid. don't you have more chapters than this? ok, well, thats all for me. yeah, i know. no slanderous words for anyone. hehe.

ta.

wow, i'm really hooked on this story. You're a great writer, keep up the good work and update soon! I'm DYING to know what happens with Alexia and Jake!

I really like this story. It sort of mixes love with mystery cause u never know what jake will do next and if him and Alexia will be 2gether. I hope they will.

I don't know, but I like this chapter o Heh, keep it going _~

AW! Alexia seems soo sweet! Please update ASAP! Really awesome job ttyl :)

~Sprite~

was suposed to say dude. not dud. hehe. i can't type.. you have to put some more shit in here man. it's great so far. hehehe. i want the new ataris cd. the ataris are sexy. the lead singer has a hott voice. ok, ta.