I really like it. Continue soon please!

very sweet

please continue

dud, fuck all those people who say it's a walk to remember knock off. if i say it's chill, then it's all good man. j/k. really though, there may be a few similaraties or h/e it's spelled, but it's your own shit and they can't be all that awesome if they're gonna knock it. like they're so great anyways. write more damn it i need something to do other that reading the second-rate shit on here. woo! i made an elastic ball. and i asked mike to come to florida w/ me and he would have probably considered it if he had been able to go. but he can't cuz my mom's a psycho. hehehe. wouldn't that have been great? yeah. it would've been. hehe, ok, i kinda got a little off topic, so i think i'll just go. bbye. and write some more shit man.

's a fairly cute story o Very action packed since the beginning, keep it going _~

hey kid, that was awesome. haha. this jake character should be wearing a gold-colored timberland sweatshirt cuz thats what poopsicle wears. hehe. ok, well, it's awesome so far. write more stuff and put it up soon. i hate cliff hangers man.

It's great!

I love it so far!

Update soon please

hey chelse that story was great i take it you like writing your really good at it tell me when your done ive been dying for some thing good to read and this seems to have great potential. Have justin tell me when yo finished see you soon.

Chels,

the story is pretty good. You describe things well but there are some gramatical stuff u could change and a few typing errors. And what does that story of the pregnant chick and rick have to do with anything? All in all it was a good story, be sure to write more

This is great!A story doesn't have to totally oringinal. You can get ideas form things, like a movie! Well, anyway, I really like and I hope to see more soon!

I think its really good it was fun to read

excellent story! everything from the plot to the character development was absolutely amazing. i would like a more definite ending, but for the 3 chapters that i saw, i definitely enjoyed reading it!

hey chelsea! great story! keep goin cuz itz really good! ima be famous rapper. your gonna be a famous writer! itz all good! haha 143z babe!

Wow! your a really good writer! I really like like story, you have really good talent! keep up the good work!

Hey Again "Catino."

Love the story. I never saw the movie A walk toRemember but if that other person is correct when saying there similar I would twist it around. I like eggs!

hey hey hey!

was that a shot?

I think it was, just use my paranoia in your story why don't you!