|Reviews for Eternity in a Kiss|
| anich chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
very beautiful may i say
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
This is well written and you have a great focus; you make good points and I can relate. Your rhyming is very natural. Great work, I liked this a lot.
| Lady Padawan chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
I like how you suggest that "identity" is *fluid* in the last stanza. Boy or girl, man or woman, love knows no sex, age, or design. Gorgeous!
| LynaX chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
Quite excellent and I love it! ;-D
| Skylar Rose chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
I'm glad to see you found what makes you happy! What a strong piece! And you rhyme so naturally! Great, great work!
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
Interesting, good poem, some lines didn't read all that well... I liked the lines, but the structure changed a lot, and sometimes it felt like there were words missing to make the lines a bit shorter which distracted me from the content... but from a second reading I do like this... have written some poems on a similar subjet, come and have a look see if when you have some time. keep writing x weasel within x
| Nanners chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Nice poem. I like that it rhymes! _ I love rhyming poetry.
| Boys For Sale chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Nice poem! From your biography, it seems you are the same sort of guy that I feel like sometimes... I like how you are involved in your school.. I am the President of my GSA- it's so much fun. The world needs more people like you.
| sciwriter13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
i love this poem. you are an excellent writer.
| an ebony flame chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
Very impressive. Usually, I hate rhyming poems, but the rhyme in this one accurately enforces the theme.
| xLecta chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Wow. That was. GREAT
Beautiful wording, idea, format, powerful ending, it was wonderful.
| Daughter Of Liberty chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
I like it. It's very detailed and realistic. it even rhymes! it's awesome.
| libras chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
The beginnig had kind odf a typical feel to it, but otherwise, it was a great poem (and I usually dont say this cuz I dont know much about poems).
| MonkeyAlien chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
| greenfroggies chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
moving...beautiful. An amazing poem - so much emotion in it! Keep writing and i am glad you have found yourself.