Reviews for Last Goodbye
OuttaSight chapter 1 . 3/28/2003
Hey anita its me Hannah.

I think this story is very emotions in this are very real and I felt that I could relate. you use very vivid descriptions which help to capture the feelings throughout. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more!
freedomhowler chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
i loved your you know what the bad part is? i feel even more depressed than . keep writing. the story actually made me feel what she must be feeling. it was short but sweet my kind of writitng.


hyperdemonbunny21657 chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
and you said what you wrote was bad. you are excellent at capturing emotions and putting them into words. that 1st paragraph perfectly depicts the pain of loss. please put up more of your work.