Reviews for Lunch Poem
ShinigamiForever chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
and there is an

overpowering color of salad dressing

on the mortared walls

*thumbs up* lovely.
makkenjii chapter 1 . 3/3/2003
Ugh, those pigeons. wish Bridget hadn't said that.

Anyway. "lunch is / a lesson in quantum physics, with / an aside of ornithology" - love it. You've used such great imagery here! It's delicious.
Karbon Okapi chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
Wow, that brings back a lot of memories. But we had pigeons, not seagulls, and I never had anyone like him to admire at lunch.
E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
oh my. O_o gorgeous descriptions, especially

"the coke

can he holds has beads of condensation licking

down the spheroid sides, and lunch is

a lesson in quantum physics, with

an aside of ornithology, and there are

white clouds over the fresh vines climbing

over the wooden fences across

the parking lot."

murr.[is happy]

EG