|Reviews for Lunch Poem|
| ShinigamiForever chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
and there is an
overpowering color of salad dressing
on the mortared walls
*thumbs up* lovely.
| makkenjii chapter 1 . 3/3/2003
Ugh, those pigeons. wish Bridget hadn't said that.
Anyway. "lunch is / a lesson in quantum physics, with / an aside of ornithology" - love it. You've used such great imagery here! It's delicious.
| Karbon Okapi chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
Wow, that brings back a lot of memories. But we had pigeons, not seagulls, and I never had anyone like him to admire at lunch.
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
oh my. O_o gorgeous descriptions, especially
can he holds has beads of condensation licking
down the spheroid sides, and lunch is
a lesson in quantum physics, with
an aside of ornithology, and there are
white clouds over the fresh vines climbing
over the wooden fences across
the parking lot."