nicebut not very deep, of courseyou're fine-tuning your skills as a poet, and that's what's the secret?and, like "writer of poetry" said, it's not very original.( I hope you haven't taken any of my reviews as flames... they're just constructive criticism)

Wow! You're good! I liked it

this is not that great. no offense. this is not meant as a flame, just that its ! lots of ppl write about topics like this. why dont you write about a banana? or a radish? or something out of the oridnary. just the thoughts of some random guy

later