pretty poem. if anyone says that Wicca isn't a true religion, spit in their eye and tell them that Pagans attend the World Parliment of Religions everytime it convenes.
blessed be.

very cool! are all the words capitalized by the first letter purposly tho?

It's a girl summonin the elements, right? I love it. I like poems about wiccan beliefs, gods/goddesses. You are an excellant poet, y'know? Love it, write more soon...

Nice. This is a really good poem

Right on. Short and sweet and to the point. I know the feeling of losing time all to well.

*Blessed Be, Dark Vampire*

I love it!Its a really good as for constructive critisim i have be~

Whee! How cool! I loved how you worded this! . Very nifty-ful. Blessed Be!~

Kawaii poem!

I'm right along with you in the wiccan scheme of things. Happy to see another one around here _

Blessed be!

Selene;)

I like the rhyme scheme. Short but cute, and don't feel that just because you're Wiccan that everyone is against you. I got over that after I got into the religion and now my views are "Hate me if you don't like me, but don't hate me because of what I worship." And you know what? If they do, screw them. They're not open minded enough to at least say "Oh, you're different, cool!" But back to the poem. I like it, I'm not good at rhyming I commend you on being able to do it, LoL. Hm.I don't really know what to say for constructive criticism, and I'm usually good at .yeah. I'll just go read some of your other stuff maybe? ;; Keep up the writing!

Lord and Lady Bless,

Dawn

nice. i know what its like to lose track of time when working with the elements. nice job!

it could be because its 3:19am here, but i dont get this poem, whats up with the girl, huh?